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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-10-02 03:15 AM



Words tangled in the midst of bitter faces
Better places
You'd know
I'd never go
Drowned by the voices of the tangle of webs

The tangle voices in a tangle of telling fibs
Only you can make the darkness turn to light
And its like such a worthless plight
To fight out of the tangle of voices from bitter faces

I guess I could shout in a different places
Or maybe pout in judgmental this disgrace is
Huh,
Like the rhythm of a river, my poems flows
Like a feather in the sun, my poems glows
My voice drowned
In the tangle of the voices from better faces

Better, more whole, perhaps blessed by god himself
The ones who float above the clouds themselves
Pick me up, together we could play
Empty dreams of dreamers forever we could say

Poems from poets, let the poetry bubble
Words from the lips, here to only start trouble
Tears from a mother who's seen roadkill
Shame it was her son, no longer to fulfill
His mothers dreams
Just a corpse on the road
It all seems
So sad, so unforgiving
Thats it for me.
I'm done giving.


"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-10-03 01:43 PM



Like the rhythm of a river, my poems flow
Like a feather in the sun, my poems glow
_________

love these lines poet




N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
2 posted 2009-10-03 06:59 PM


Seems I only have a select few who enjoy my poems, you among them.

Thank you for the response.

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