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Ellen Was A Colorful Fish.
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Ellen Was A Colorful Fish. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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You were a herring, red and red and red. I slipped you daisy-yellow notes, and gave you neon green signs. You used a fancy purple pen to write on them smiles and laughs, and handed them back. I gave you gold gold and lavender secrets. Spent my time dreaming of beige things to do, do with you. You were a herring, red and red and red. All you've left me is a sigh of your midnight blue. __________________________________ I Do Everything Out of Order, Ellen. (Last piece in the series.) -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
red and red and red.... I could spend all day trying to interpret this one, if my head weren't in the clouds. Very cool and colorful! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Past tense first is an interesting way to be "RED" .... I did enjoy the spectrum of the piece. Ct |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I gave you gold gold and lavender secrets. Spent my time dreaming of beige things to do, do with you." as always you make me smile  a delight to read you every single time! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Blues... Thanks.  Ctowen... Thanks man. SEA... I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do love that you read all of my poems. Youz a wondahfahl laday. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~i'm sorry it didn't work out for you, paulie... |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
That's the way the wheel turns, ma'am. Thank you, brown eyes. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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