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My Paris view...
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My Paris view... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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As I look thru my French doors There is open space filled with sky so blue There are balconies that beg you to stand on them There is noise from people below There is peace also The sky alone can bring this to you Like flying thru the clouds And landing in a place so beautiful You hold your breath and close your eyes For fear it will disappear But no It still remains This splendid city that holds my heart This is my Paris view... Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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larzana Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55 |
I love it like always. You keep Paris alive in my heart. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Yes indeed. Love your views of Paris. latearrival |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, this is beautiful penning my friend, I felt myself looking out and seeing through your eyes, I felt happy and relaxed, Paris must be wonderful. Great work here  Rick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you for letting us be voyeurs. *S* |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Never seen Paris..but it was right before me as i read through.. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Roniece for sharing wonderful sensations, a very enjoyable Paris you offer me. regards yann |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
What more can I do but smile? "A spring shower was cause to run |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
RDB, what a beautiful and personal view of the "City of Light." Thank you so much. Sutra 5: Public self-criticism does not brighten one’s Spark of Brahman: it merely feeds one’s narcissism. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Darling friend, I know that you carry this beautiful view with you always and forever. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Ali-girl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
RDB, Where are you now that you have returned home from your Paris? I miss you and hope all is well. love you, my friend ... Ali-girl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely view you offered from Paris, dear Roniece! Thank you. We saw more of you indeed when you were in Paris than now that you are home. Well I know where you can be found! On fb and there are quite a few beloved Pipsters who are roaming facebook and neglect Pip, which is making me sad. So please come back here too! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have always wished to travel there~~ thank you for your views M |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Wouldn't picture it any other way than by you ... : ) CT |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How lovely. The poem as well as the view. Just enough there to set the mood, and leave us with it. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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