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passing shadows
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Sailin' On

People from my old life
often ask me how I've been,
I say, "I'm fair to partly cloudy
with evenin' storms rollin' in"
mourning the garden, singing
a little James Taylor to the wind.

There's red skies in the morning
and the air is so cold-
feels like it's frozen my throat;
here I am, stuck on this boat
that's three hundred years old.

But I keep sailin' on
till I sink or breach another shore,
with undying hope for a purple dawn
where my old life will be no more.


© Copyright 2009 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-09-30 08:07 PM


passing shadows - putting the past behind is a good thing, however, never forgotten...

BC

marcel
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2 posted 2009-10-02 02:05 PM


I definitely feel you on this piece....I think the both of us have sailed those same seas...Beautifully expressed and sentimented.


Margherita
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3 posted 2009-10-02 05:13 PM


Dear Dixie, you are sailing on beautifully.

The past loses its heaviness when we plant new seeds in the present. And I believe you are doing this very well.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-10-02 05:54 PM


Wonderful...James
latearrival
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5 posted 2009-10-02 08:29 PM


Nice words. You are still a poet. You Are Loved..
LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-10-02 10:05 PM



Dear Dixie, I'm sure you are sailing on with the right attitude, I'm sure there will be gold at the rainbows end or at some distant shore. Good luck dear Lady. love.

Lindsay

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7 posted 2009-10-03 12:04 PM


And sailing on is what we do best, isn't it? If we didn't, we'd never get anywhere.

Enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2009-10-03 12:14 PM


Sometimes "sailing on" is easier said than done.

"I'm fair to partly cloudy
with evenin' storms rollin' in"

~ I've got to remember that line! I sure know how that feels!


Linda


brneyedgrly
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9 posted 2009-10-03 01:31 PM



  I love the spirit of this  

  keep sailin..


passing shadows
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10 posted 2009-10-03 05:26 PM


it's so nice to see all these kind comments, all my friends here in one place!

Well still don't have high speed internet but hopefully next week...then I can tolerate to be online without wanting to throw the computer out the window.


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