Open Poetry #45 |
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Sailin' On |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced ![]() |
Sailin' On People from my old life often ask me how I've been, I say, "I'm fair to partly cloudy with evenin' storms rollin' in" mourning the garden, singing a little James Taylor to the wind. There's red skies in the morning and the air is so cold- feels like it's frozen my throat; here I am, stuck on this boat that's three hundred years old. But I keep sailin' on till I sink or breach another shore, with undying hope for a purple dawn where my old life will be no more. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
passing shadows - putting the past behind is a good thing, however, never forgotten... BC |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I definitely feel you on this piece....I think the both of us have sailed those same seas...Beautifully expressed and sentimented. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dixie, you are sailing on beautifully. The past loses its heaviness when we plant new seeds in the present. And I believe you are doing this very well. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Nice words. You are still a poet. You Are Loved.. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Dixie, I'm sure you are sailing on with the right attitude, I'm sure there will be gold at the rainbows end or at some distant shore. Good luck dear Lady. love. Lindsay |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
And sailing on is what we do best, isn't it? If we didn't, we'd never get anywhere. Enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sometimes "sailing on" is easier said than done. ![]() "I'm fair to partly cloudy with evenin' storms rollin' in" ~ I've got to remember that line! I sure know how that feels! ![]() Linda |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I love the spirit of this ![]() keep sailin.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's so nice to see all these kind comments, all my friends here in one place! Well still don't have high speed internet but hopefully next week...then I can tolerate to be online without wanting to throw the computer out the window. |
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