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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2009-09-30 07:09 AM



when you are the dawn song woman
I listen to your waterfall whispering
and it turns me to the stone you worship

my fingers play the freckle notes there
and your breasts lean into crescendos
jutting jaunty to injure my panting sighs

my mind unties the ribbons from your hair
and disturbs your curls into frenzying
you glisten like the damp yacht sails

and ride the waves of our tiding convulsions
your chanting is as a siren beckoning
to her lover to impale himself on her agony

and then the mirrors know you as soft swallowing


___________

daark (do of water)

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unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

1 posted 2009-09-30 01:04 PM


What am I going to do with you...

My day isn't complete without dabbling a toe in your ink.

H

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-09-30 01:12 PM


ms UBP, thanks lady friend..I hope it is always wet and you are always barefoot..
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-09-30 04:31 PM


dabbing a toe?...shew..I have the ink all over me after reading this...I need a shower!

~ARH

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-10-01 07:12 AM


ms ARH..there is a sprinkler you can run through?  thanks ms
brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
5 posted 2009-10-03 01:40 PM



my mind unties the ribbons from your hair
_________

love this tender  


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-10-04 07:08 AM


ms browneyes, thank you for the sigh sounds
Margherita
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7 posted 2009-10-05 11:21 AM


quote:
when you are the dawn song woman
I listen to your waterfall whispering
and it turns me to the stone you worship



Brilliant writing. You have a peculiar way of combining roaring passion with quiet surrendering to the gifts of life and love... just like a waterfall whose overwhelmingly loud music calms down to total peace once the water settles at its feet ...

Love,
Margherita

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