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Afterglow
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Afterglow |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Eyes that see through me And hands of human clay Ears that hold my plea And mouth upon I pray These are the things I entreat Inside my mind, if not portray I’m waiting for the light to show Waiting, for the afterglow Make me whole and entire With warmth and arms around Making our own little fire Listen to the peaceful sound This, my life, you inspire For this, I won’t come back down I’m waiting for the love to grow Waiting, for the afterglow Don’t let me fall from so high And only these things, bring So that I forget how it was to cry And the pendulum starts to swing Look only into my burning eyes They only mean everything I’m waiting for time to overthrow Waiting, for the afterglow |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
your afterglow..is glowing  ~ARH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Look only into my burning eyes They only mean everything I've read this several times this morning... and found it more exquisite with every read. Beautiful work!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
simply beautiful!! Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It seems to me that you are wrapped in the glow of love and the poem holds the afterglow ... Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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