Song (Written for "kh2fm95")

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Open Poetry #45

Song (Written for "kh2fm95")

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

0 posted 2009-09-28 08:45 PM

Love song to be sung by: "kh2fm95"
For: Miranda Cosgrov
Written by: Lost-Poet

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The look you give me,
us,
In your eyes,
In your smile
We see the beauty
The tiny spark that is
Infestation belonging to the heart
Such a ugly word
For taking such a beautiful part
In this dark world
Where light is so precious

Meaningless the words that I spoke
Meaningful the feeling that it took
You won't quite see
What can one say
To catch the eye
Of the beautiful, sun in the sky

Everything is changing
Everyone is different
Let it forever be
The way it shall, forever free
To say these words
Even if a wall built will never fall
My life will never be empty
For its me your eyes saw
Even if I am never to bend this law
I will attempt to cross the seas
To prove love is blind

Meaningless the words that spoke
Meaningful the feeling it took
You won't quite see
What can one say
To catch the eye
Of the beautiful, sun in the sky

Eyes of clay, yet to me it is gold
Hair of night, to me it is bright
I was never one to be singing
Was never the one told
This feeling in me so strong
So powerfully subtle
Words to show we belong
Come to me like a flowing river
So smile at me won't you?
Send me a shiver
Test my faith, test my soul
My love I'll deliver

Meaningless the words that spoke
Meaningful the feeling it took
You won't quite see
What can one say
To catch the eye
Of the beautiful, sun in the sky

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

1 posted 2009-09-29 10:19 PM

Absolutely Delightful!!!
Oscar also said, "I always pass along advice, one really doesn't know what else to do with it."
For that reason I'll offer no advice on your poem.

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