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Lorenn
Junior Member
since 2009-09-23
Posts 15
Ottawa Ontario

0 posted 2009-09-24 12:54 PM


Without knowing your name, I searched....
I dreamt, wished and prayed for you,
..... an eternity, I knew, since we'd been one

Faint whispers in the forest taunted me,
Gave me hope or left me empty,
The echo I could never grasp...

Your name, essence, kindness, heart and soul...
Always.....  just..... out of my reach

M...n.....an..... I heard the wind whisper in my quietest moments of prayer,
Tears pouring down my face, my heart aching to be with you

Lone wolf with my shadow by side,
Between each battle fought and won,
Listening for the faintest song,
Of a long ago promised vow

M...n....an.... whispered the pines,
Tormenting me, testing my faith in the anticipated rapture,
The joy of gratitude for the gift of our reunion

Your name, your warmth, your breath haunted me....
You see my anguished tracks, wolf, hunting, waiting, watching, hungry....
Where are you?

M...n...an... whispered the snow as it caressed my skin,
It's cold bite, mocking the warmth I crave from you,
My own private hell, a test of faith greater then imagined...

M..i.n...an

M..in...gan...

Mingan.... Mingan...Mingannn
Your whispers... I breathe deeply .....
In your arms, now I am free
.... I am home

© Copyright 2009 Sylvie R Bilodeau - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-24 06:18 PM


Welcome to Pip, dear Sylvie.

Wonderful first entry! There is indeed this feeling of reunion with someone very special that enters our life, as if they were indeed an answer to our longing.

Love,
Margherita

Lorenn
Junior Member
since 2009-09-23
Posts 15
Ottawa Ontario
2 posted 2009-09-24 06:28 PM


Thank you Margherita for your warm welcome and kind comments.

I wrote this a while ago for my fiance.  We originally met several years ago and lost touch but we were always on each other's minds... looking for each other online...
It was very much worth the wait and search to to have such an amazing soul in my life...

Thanks again, it's a pleasure being here

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-09-26 07:21 PM


Enjoyed...James
rachaelfuchsberger
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4 posted 2009-09-26 08:06 PM


Welcome to pipTalk Sylvie. This was certainly a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

Arana Darkwolf

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 345

5 posted 2009-09-26 11:38 PM


Welcome to pip!
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2009-09-30 11:56 AM


Welcome to PIP, Loenn. Enjoyed your first post.
                               Ida

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