Open Poetry #45 |
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Daughter of my Dreams |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
With flouncing ruffles, silken lace surrounds my darling daughter's face. Her laugh, untainted ecstasy; as pure as rain and just for me. Her dove-like softness; glowing eyes, can clear the cloudy o'ercast skies And melt my soul from head to toes. I spin her round and hold her close. I love her more than life, it seems. My darling daughter of my dreams. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear UNTAMEDelegance, This is a very fine poem. I remember my daughters the same way. Love Bobby |
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Sonofgloin Junior Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 48Australia |
Uncluttered, elagant and poignant...thanks Paul... |
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