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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-09-23 02:15 AM


Annie Demaret’s hair
was pale blonde
All day long she wore
a cute milk mustache

My hair was brunette
and I didn’t drink milk
My mother wiped
my face all the time

I envied Annie's
beautiful mustache

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Alison

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-23 07:38 AM


Oh, Alison, I just needed a smile and here you provide it. Thank you, this is so cute!



Margherita

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2 posted 2009-09-23 08:09 AM


oh hell, now you are writing about one of my ex-wives..dammit..I miss that moustache too
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-09-23 11:04 AM


Sweetheart, wait long enough and you'll have your own mustache ~ but it won't be a milk one! lol

Cute write from a cutie pie.


Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-23-2009 12:51 PM).]

ESHA SEN GUPTA
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4 posted 2009-09-23 12:11 PM


Loved the write,you know the wistful longing of childhood always lurks in our heart.You brought it out with simple words.


Love Esha


Misty Lilacs
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5 posted 2009-09-23 12:32 PM


So precious!

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LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-09-23 11:39 PM



Quite a cute post dear Alison.
enjoyd. love.

Lindsay

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-09-24 12:02 PM



  you know now that you are beautiful, right?

                  

               inside and out

shel  


Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
8 posted 2009-09-25 02:01 AM


Thank you for spending time with Annie and me.  May you all wear milk mustaches with pride!

xoxoox
Alison

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