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ESHA SEN GUPTA
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0 posted 2009-09-23 12:29 PM



WHICH WAY DO I GO

Mind says sit back and enjoy the moment,
Heart says no use all is lost ,
Mind says just wait for the right moment,
Heart says faith itself is lost.

Which way do I go is all I can think,
Love if it was true will come back in due time,
The thought is taking time to sink,
The ways of God is for us not to mime.

He works in his own strange ways,
Hearts desires he fulfils when least we expect,
Faith in his judgement should we have always,
Lo! We get more than we expect.


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martiniat8
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1 posted 2009-09-23 01:12 AM


Wow, this is great honest and original! I think I may have someone that is going through what you speak of. The only advice I can give is trust your pure instincts and don't over think it. I hope all turns out well for you.
I'd like to read about what more you got than expected and this is a GREAT line.

"The ways of God is for us not to mime."

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-09-23 10:43 AM


Yes, we always do have reason to be grateful, dear Esha! Very much enjoyed your heart and mind comparison and the conclusion.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-09-23 10:59 AM


I understand, as will most readers, I would wager! Oh, those emtional quanderies. Which way to go? What should I do? Like yourself, I end up "Letting go, and letting God".

I understand that ultimately, all happens in Divine time! ~ I just wish it didn't take so long!

A fine write by a fine lady!


Linda

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4 posted 2009-09-25 12:57 PM


Sometimes, it is hard to have faith - and to know that what we go through now might be what is best for us later.

I know what I mean - not that I make sense right now.

Alison

GBride
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5 posted 2009-09-25 08:05 PM


Fantasitic!!!
Lorenn
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6 posted 2009-09-25 10:19 PM


Hi Esha

You did a wonderful job of bringing to life those conflicting emotions...

As I read your poem, I felt the pull and push, the panic, and resignation....

Very well done

Lorenn

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-09-26 07:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2009-09-26 11:06 PM


ESHA...I can tell you from experience that God does amswer prayers in due time. Some real quick some take longer but your prayers will get answered. Enjoyed reading you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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9 posted 2009-09-27 01:05 PM


nice
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