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Two As One |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA 
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This is actually inspired by watching the video 99 Balloons on You tube. It is about a family cherishing their life with their son Elliot. It really is a must see especially if you feel life is going to fast, wondering where the time went and never stopped to smell the roses..I true lesson in the love of life..Today is what counts.. Spending time Moments, minutes, seconds, as they pass Watching you wake in the morning sun Laughing, giglling, just having fun Holding your hand feeing your touch gazing in your beautiful brown eyes feeling my heart fill with fire Can't disquise it would never want to For I have the deepest desire Sharing the air in which we breath Stealing glances from each other Smiling at the unknown thoughts Realizing this is our very own spot Dancing without nervousness or hesitation Relishing your beauty and captivation Sighing, crying, comforting, listening Exploring the adventure of our day With you, I'd have it no other way I want this to be our days memories Not our lifes, but just today's For everyday should be a cherished day Sharing emotion, glances, touches and love Paired, Fused, Matched, Together, Two as One |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, I'd say you were inspired to write this gentle love song. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
we can reach and we can remember, but we can only live today ... I agree, an inspiration! Ct |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Awwww, this is so sweet, yes, I can agree with all the sentiments, each day should be a celebration of life.... You captured it well here.... ~ARH |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Ah yes, may we always take time to smell the roses :-) This one has made a great impression on my mind and heart. Wonderful and heartwarming poesy and a pleasure to read SimOriah:-) Heart2Heart PS: Going to look up at that video on You Tube ! |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Thanks you guys.. It really doesn't do justice compared to the video i tell ya and heart2heart you better grab a box of tissues cause it is very touching! Rich |
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