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You and Me |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA 
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I cannot help but wonder- Just how it came to be- The magic thing that seemed to grow… Engulfing you and me. The feelings that words can’t express- That ‘neath our armors pry… And leave us sad and empty- With a deep desire to cry. Impossible, the fantasy, Which oft my mind consumes… With both the chill of winter frost- And sweetness of spring’s blooms. The placid peace of mountain lakes- The pow’r of raging sea… This tragedy or triumph- That has captured you and me. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
The placid peace of mountain lakes- The pow’r of raging sea… This tragedy or triumph- That has captured you and me. ____________ enjoyed your sweet words  |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Thank you. You are very kind. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Impossible, the fantasy, Which oft my mind consumes… With both the chill of winter frost- And sweetness of spring’s blooms. It is amazing what the eye of the beholder sees - you captured this feeling so well. I enjoyed your poetic diversion this day. Still love your stores of the old West (or Texas) though |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Something different from you, but very nice really. Love, M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is different but still excellent. Ida |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
VERY NICE!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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