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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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It would be amazing, you and I Nothing else exists, but Earth and sky A special bond that we shall make To heal each, the other’s ache Sometimes only a voice is needed Hearing so as not to go unheeded Or sometimes breathing is the only sound Nothing else matters when no one is around It could and should be amazing, you and I The need deep inside you do not deny In this flame you call life, you’re all I see Give in to the heat as you burn in me |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*whew* it just got real warm here  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Intensely captivating. Could make s'mores with this one  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~scorching, guy.... : ) |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Oh yeah..this is good alright. Well crafted for sure with a passionate theme. what more could i want? Yoin |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think this is an elegant display of passion and desire. I like it. Alison |
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