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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Initials of a name Might write them, initially were it not for waiting lists partially scripted pies blackbird sources emitted fresh mists along lonely ways in painted worlds admitted secrets of my own who wrote those numbered tales kept counting standing norms that successful brush stroke do I worry about a miss? when treated initially like secrets baked naturally wore heart sounds initially, a single night if I hadn't stopped Incidentally, might make it were it not for being removed from cooled plum pies their preheated thoughts; might keep counting successfully baked moments, blackbird releases after a broken heart initially, initiated blackbird release But for effortless varieties heedless sources plunged into clear resources, people island hopped met there initially their worlds afire counted their hits and misses there were those first encounters blue hearts special maybe someone was there pretending to be mine with an initialed script. people met there initially in my heart no other ambition admiration, world on fire do I lose any sleep? Might make it initially counting hits and and misses some day getting old would forget to love if I did not care initially the initials of a name. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great ending, dear Martin. Your "Initial" is quite the puzzle, but real fun to read. Pleasant extravagance! Love, M |
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