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of a plastic glass buddha
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of a plastic glass buddha |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said it was in the details that thing you needed for your soul to make rose tattoos out of stitches where that itch had been implanted and then was later removed something about the residue you said that yesteryear slow motion video that kept you awake at night sometimes and made you dream of sleeping with your eyes wide open again I made you promises out of wooden ends you said even stones would have healed as long as my hands did the praying and you were the prey I worshiped in the most ungodly ways imaginable we were daylight and dark different then like sky and water at some cloudy high noon only touching at our horizon edges but never in the middle where love was since our hearts were only jewelry anyway earings perhaps on a plastic glass buddha _____________ daark (residue) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhh my, big hugs and smiles enjoyed this and have missed reading you... you certainly have a way with words.... I'll stop there well done my friend... Lee J. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
As long as my hands did the praying... awesome. really enjoyed this one, monsieur. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, thanks lady friend ___________ VM, thanks amigo!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You never fail to impress me with your art and the above stanza is of such ethereal substance and uncommon beauty that it moves me. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks so much lady friend |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You stone me with your gifts D. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP..."everyone must get stoned.." Bob Dylan? thanks lady |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
we were daylight and dark different then like sky and water at some cloudy high noon only touching at our horizon edges ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You took me there and left me swooning!! What a vision!! I like the reflections and the slant of the sunlight. Really nice, DS~ warm hugs and lovies~ |
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Hatmadda Junior Member
since 2009-06-11
Posts 10Colorado |
Really something. I don't know if it does this for anyone else, but your pieces have this quality to me like movies shot with grey filters and they color-tone the hell out of a particular item, like someone's eyes, or in this case (like in one of your other ones) some red jewelry. Very stirring. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy, thanks babe!! ________________ hat, humble thanks for the read, I do appreciate the eyeprints. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the rose tattoo that itches beneath craving your ink, in thorn and in petalm as do i to be painted atop your skin |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki..the old needle is always around to prick you and make you smile new colors..thanks lady friend |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you said even stones would have healed as long as my hands did the praying and you were the prey I worshiped in the most ungodly ways imaginable You weave such a spell with words... and I don't want to hear the fingers snap. *S* |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
I made you promises out of wooden ends you said even stones would have healed as long as my hands did the praying and you were the prey I worshiped in the most ungodly ways imaginable This is incredible and makes me wish that I was what you worshipped! As usual your ability to weave words is incredible!!!!!! Pretty1 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thank you lady friend.. _____________ ms pretty1, I do spend time admiring your temple often..thanks babe |
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