Open Poetry #45 |
beautiful ghosts |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
beautiful ghosts dark leaves rustle in a chill Autumn wind beneath a most uncertain moon who can truly know the human heart and what remains when love vanishes … so easily forgotten --- b. e. adams (9/19/2009) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Bruce.. I loved every line! I don't think love ever vanishes.. it may fade a little but never leaves us.. Beautiful offering as always Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful - but I think that love kind of blows around like the leaves and always comes back to grow again. Yep. I think that, my Bruce friend. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful ghosts, beautiful poem. In my opinion real love never dies, just changes over time. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As you write so intensely of it, you have not forgotten ... Love IS. Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ghost of past loves...they do haunt and taunt us... ~Loved it! ~ARH |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
dark leaves rustle in a chill Autumn wind beneath a most uncertain moon who can truly know the human heart and what remains when love vanishes … so easily forgotten _____________ I really enjoy your writing |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I had to come back to this poem - it is beautiful, Bruce. Alison |
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