Open Poetry #45 |
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Sunset no more |
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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
The billboards are climbing too high How far must we climb to see that sun set The girl i thought i would spend it all with Isn't here to witness the last rays Where could she have gone Is it worth a fight Alyson how much can i lie You were my end of my road My goal that is so far i cant even reach it with a stone Is it time to put out this candle light? How much can we do to find a ladder for one last time The billboards have left us in the shadow McDonald's Arches are still here Are they golden like the first rise of the sun Can we figure it out or will we just fall I have never felt alone The sun has died My lost dream wont be found Alyson was my life line |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your heart weeps and sunset collaborates to make you feel the melancholy. Lovely write. May you gain clarity! Love, Margherita |
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