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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Maybe Today My thoughts change the way of the free Or is it society that is changing me I have often wondered; Am I in control? Or is it the world of difference that is me it has stole? I look around at the people so near And often think; is that me? over there So many people! so many the same All fighting for a place in the final game.. Enjoying the sunlight of a brand new dawn basking in the warmth of the day I look around at the bustling life anew Maybe today things will go my way Jumping up from my sleepless rest I stumble to catch the dawns ray I am thinking it wont be quite so bad Maybe today; things will go my way. Annie 18=06=2009 [This message has been edited by Anniepimm (06-19-2009 03:31 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's good work, dear Annie, and I love your analysis and the confidence. Things will go your way today I am pretty sure. You have honored the day. Love, Margherita  |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Anniepimm - I'm looking in my crystal ball through the haziness and I see that things will indeed go your way. Have a little Faith. Most times, that's all that's needed. Your poem is a prize. Loved it. Namyh |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Annie, I like this poem. Keep up the good work. Things are sure to go your way, because you deserve it. Love Bobby |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww thank you All for your lovely comments they are much appreciated.. Blessings to you..  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Atta girl Annie, a positive approach is all that is needed. Go for it and good luck. Lindsay |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Lindsay... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they do go your way when you command then to |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Maybe but not always.. Thank you for your feed back.. |
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