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river of wine |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I would always imagine my imagination being a window without the makeup of drapery just a hesitation place she would stand after when the rain was over and the glowing began that place where she would unfold her fragile and place it over the back of a chair boldly as if it were armor turned wrong side out and she didn't care if the heart side showed she would sing songs of the wolves dancing and how her legs were useless to run then when her woman skin drifted on freedom wings and she could feel her heartbeat in the sand I would always imagine my imagination being a window that she left open there wide enough to walk through in easy shoes and closed enough to capture barefoot steps that might seek the leather of new highways ___________ daark (way of wax) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oui, oui, I like walking barefoot thru your poems Mr Daark... just lovely! Bisous de Paris (thanks to Margherita, I have the De and the Du sorted!)  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh! Such incredible imagery and imagination! "River of wine" makes me think of being love drunk, thus needing the refreshening touch of the highway winds ... Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
as if it were armor turned wrong side out and she didn't care if the heart side showed sweet |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend __________ ms browneyes, thank you for the sweet reply |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely - you touched me in that heart place. A |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...intimate trust here, to turn fragile heartside out to open soul windows and capture barefoot steps in new imagination. I felt the sand and a little rain came, too. ~KL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one ______________ ms kl, thanks special friend...you always smile me with your thoughts |
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