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Like a tiger
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Like a tiger |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
I'm falling even more in love with you I'm losing all my faith I'm forgetting my path on the road to glory I'm falling even more in love with you I'm losing all my faith I'm forgetting my path on the road to glory I'm losing all that is to lose I'm loving none that I can I'm lost in a world of light My eyes closed Suns too bright When you come by My mind is dark and damp That is why I lie To make you smile To make you come by So I can close my eyes To be forgotten My mind plays tricks on me My mind plays tricks on me My mind plays tricks on me My mind plays tricks on me How silly of me To have my mind Play tricks on me It says you love me too It says you love me too It says to write on the walls In scripture so beautiful You'll come running Into my arms It says you love me too My mind plays tricks on me I'm falling more in love with you Suns too bright I close my eyes To be forgotten That is why I lie It says to write on the walls Scripture so beautiful It says to write on the walls How silly of me. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And in a certain way you dared to write it on the walls of Pipland and ... that wasn't a silly idea at all. I believe it is never silly to confess love, even if we have that subtle fear of not being requited. You did this in a captivating way. Love, Margherita |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
You write the best poetry ever!!! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you very much  |
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