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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-06-17 07:23 PM

Princess Silver Sleigh

From the massive walls
of her castle
she seemed unattainable,
and she was
except for those times
when she would
visit the lake
that was next
to my place,
beside the lake
in the forest
that time seemed
to forget.

Still I shall never
forget her,
once I kissed her
her essence was frozen
forever into my mind.
On the nights when the
moon was full,
on the evenings when
the weather was cool
she would come to me
riding upon her silver sled
to carry me away
to her big warm bed.
Her long black hair,
her silky red underwear,
and an ivory smile
that lit up
even the coldest nights.
I felt so warm
and loved when she
held me tight.

JamesLee
11June
2009

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-06-17 07:32 PM

On the nights when the
moon was full,
on the evenings when
the weather was cool
she would come to me
riding upon her silver sled

beautiful writing, james...i enjoyed this much!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2009-06-17 07:48 PM

this was truly beautiful...thank you for sharing...
Lee J.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-06-17 11:07 PM

This reads like a fairytale, and I adore your ending.

Just wonderful, James~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-06-18 10:31 AM

You do your Princess justice, dear Prince James!

This is very lovely and romantic.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-06-22 01:58 AM

Was she wearing a silky red union suit? This is charming, James.

Alison

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2009-06-23 10:54 PM

You are a very lucky fellow James,
You meet some beautiful girls over there in

Hawaii, it brought back great memories to me for the three days that I stayed there.
A romantic masterpiece, thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2009-06-23 10:56 PM

Well I feel warm after reading this...lol

seriously, great poem!

~ARH

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