Open Poetry #45 |
Immortal Musings 1 |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My failure has brought me to this shame Lingering deep within is this haunting pain No longer is felt what once was mine From the darkest depths a heart again will climb To only be forever lost within the tides Immortalized in the sands of time. {from the immortal journals} |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hah! More like ..."imortalized in the hearts like mine", my friend.... enjoyed... j. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ha Jimmy, this'n isn't about me in particular but from a different project I'm involved in for fun. I'm sure there will be more little snippets from it to come yet. Nice to see you hon! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
and still... Hah! More like ..."imortalized in the hearts like mine", my friend.... because you are who you are, to me! j. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
muwahh Jimmy!! Hugs you!! and thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully expressed, poignant heart-journey, dear Donna! Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
.. and this poem has heart to help us find our way to climb again. A keeper for sure, darlin'. xoxoox A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Enjoyed your words, Donna and agree with Jimmy even if it is only a "project". Hope all is well~~ M |
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