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Edge Of September
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Edge Of September |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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As though frozen in time this heart lie dormant awaiting the coming season of change… when life, in cycles rearranges Time found us there amidst the fall Hues of Autumn did not dare compare to the colors of you and I.. I dared not to look beyond this day for only time could see what these few precious moments would be. I in daze, yet awake still feel this dream how your brush stroked my soul in artistic touch your pallet held shades unknown to me and even now amber rays float down leaving slight touch of warm on pale of skin too long touched by winters kiss In glance, a gaze now turned upward towards heaven eyes wide open the truth of you stares back at me. The season’s splendor has shown its grace and I would linger in this special place knowing it would only make more difficult the journey back to an ice queens lair a palace void from shed of tears crystallized, frozen in time {echoes of when, heard in rhyme} to only glisten by sun kissed visions of remember I met you there at the edge of September when Autumn melted me with the colors of your fall. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, this is a WARM wonderful write "how your brush stroked my soul in artistic touch your pallet held shades unknown to me" and I love that ending... Donna, this is a dream come true, to see your name here again!  and thanks for reading my poem and leaving such a kind gentle reply! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"I met you there at the edge of September when Autumn melted me with the colors of your fall." Beautiful write my friend...your soul is shinning through... j. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hon any time I come to visit, its a gimme that I will seek you out, and I am always blessed to find you... Thank you hon, for taking the time to read this old thing! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Jimmy...muwah...and thank you sweetie!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now I know what you've been doing while you have been away from your pip family! ~ Writing a masterpiece! Gosh girl, you can really write. I knew I was missing your poetry but after reading this one, I beg you not to stay away so long!!  Giving you a humongous welcome-home huggaroonie! Linda  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
hello.. this is beautiful  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna, I have missed you lots. This is a poignant and beautiful sharing of thoughts and of you. You always take me some place into the emotional of you. Love you, Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Donna, just recently I went looking since when you didn't show up on Pip and I hoped you would come back and here you are! That's great. Yours is an exquisite poem, so intimately aglow. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This is your best Spirit! One of the best poems I have read on PIP in awhile... ~Thanks for the enjoyment! ~ARH |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You deserve an A+++++ for his one. Thank you. latearrival. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Awwwwww, the warming of change. Well my dear, Winter is soon approaching. Burrrrrrrrr But I know that this heart of yours will mend and be occupied in time.  tender write.ARCTIC WIND |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The season’s splendor has shown its grace and I would linger in this special place knowing it would only make more difficult the journey back to an ice queens lair Breathtakingly beautiful! *S* I agree this is one of your best... Into my library! *S* |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A very beautiful write, Donna. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Donna, all your poetry is exquisite, but I think this is your very best gem. Owl |
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larzana Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55 |
That was passively intense. Beautiful piece. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh how you have been missed, Donna Dear~~ Beautiful poem, especially those sunkist visions! I just love to read you!!! Big hugs to you gentle one~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - a most engracious writing from a gentle pen... BC |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
I don't know much but I know what I like. thank you for sharing a beautiful poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dear Pip friends, thank you all so very much for the warm welcome home and the kind words. You are each so very good to me and I appreciate you all. |
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