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Leaping for life
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Leaping for life |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Leaping for life *** Like the whale who needs to surface to breathe oxygen, leaping out of his habitat, I too, I am in need to rise above my surroundings to sip the heavenly nectar dripping from your soul. It’s a drive to survive, but even more than that it’s the awareness of being alive within this life. *** |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..you step like a dawn from the sky with your words..and they are wet warmth to the mind...enjoyed you here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
it’s the awareness of being alive within this life. And we all need something that gives us that... even if for only a season. *S* Beautiful work! *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What a beautiful way to share the drive that makes up the lovely Margherita! You shine through your poetry - and I love how each poem you share makes my world just a little bit brighter. Love, Alison |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
it’s the awareness of being alive within this life. ___________ we all need this.. beautifully expressed 'rita love you  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear, dear Dolphina, leap for life! Leap with joy! Breathe in the fresh air that streams above troubled waters. My, o', my! You look quite fit leaping so high!   Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear friends, I deeply enjoyed your loving replies to my "leap". Love and awareness always ... Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Love the rhyming you have in the last stanza, Margrit, breaking the mold just a bit which I always love to see in Poetry. Yes, it is a "drive to survive" Huggs Jan |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
What a beautiful picture. I love this strong willed poem, Margherita! ARCTIC WIND |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
May you continue to leap and to bring us joy with your hope filled messages. Love, Joyce |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow, cool write, my friend...really nice... loved the comparison you made... j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Janet, Michael, Joyce and Jimmy, for your loving replies. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Margherita.. I so love this! Bisous de Paris RDB xxxxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - I think we rise above our surroundings when we sleep. We must do otherwise we perhaps couldn't survive. I so enjoyed this. Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your words combined with that photo make me want to LEAP with sheer life-joy! |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
this poem is great! It's good to leap for life while you have the chance. Also like the dolphin it's cute |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
An inspiring write!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear All. Your replies bring smiles. Love, Margherita |
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