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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines 
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Listen to the echoes in this room. With four walls filled with memories. Shouting, calling out to you, what for so long you've been blind to see. open up the door. Let the shadows draw back. And you will hear the whisper of what was left here now. You will feel the cold, the tension. The numbning shiver on your spine. A haunting spirit of what used to be, a Past that could not get free.. Here in this Sanctuary, I wrote in the walls still imprinted; songs from my heart. The Sun, the Star and the day of the Rain. they were all causes of my pain. Here in this Sanctuary, I still come back to speak with your ghost. Longing, needing, still cant forget. This Sanctuary.. where we first and last met. "it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bravo for this fine piece of work! very, very good! loved it! ~ARH  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating write, dear Abigail, though heavy with melancholy. Love, Margherita |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
ARomanticHeart.. thanks for the reply. It is my pleasure for you to read me. ;-) |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
Margherita: Hey, Thanks for your comment. Melancholy? indeed. sometimes in order to move on you have to write it down.. and read it everytime,til you get used to how it feels reading it.. lots of thanks. |
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