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Open Poetry #45

All I desire..

MinSW
Member

since 2009-06-14

Posts 53
Sri Lanka

0 posted 2009-06-17 10:57 AM

Leave me nothing
Nothing of the world
I need nothing
All I possess
Is yours-
Yours alone.
The starry skies
My heart's desire,
The music of the waters
Its soothing sensation,
I give to you.
The dawn
The dusk
I write by your name.
My crown of glory
I put at your feet;
Each breath I take,
I take only for you.
All my joy,
My moments' laugh
I bestow for you.

In return
Give me your tears
Your sobs
Your sighs;
Leave me your sorrow-
And keep a smile.
From dawn 'till dusk
I'll feel your smile
Treasure your tears
And live.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2009-06-17 11:04 AM

"Each breath I take,
I take only for you"

...nice line...welcome to PiP...enjoyed your write

MinSW
Member

since 2009-06-14

Posts 53
Sri Lanka

2 posted 2009-06-17 11:08 AM

thank you dear..this is my tribute to my muse..my lost love..the sole reason for my writing..
thanks for readin and for the comment..

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-06-17 07:41 PM

~min...i feel your heartbreak here...and i really like your writing. welcome, friend...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2009-06-17 11:00 PM

I was totally captured by the beauty in each and every word.

I enjoyed your poem and the depth of your love~

MinSW
Member

since 2009-06-14

Posts 53
Sri Lanka

5 posted 2009-06-18 10:54 AM

thnak u blues..and brneyedgrly...ur word of encouragement mean so much..

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