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Open Poetry #45
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2009-09-10 08:46 PM



I just canÕt feel it anymore
I canÕt feel what itÕs like to be a real person,
A real something that runs with feet,
Runs around the parks and dark eyes
And fills the hallways with a broad smile.

IÕm getting slower and older
But my young bones and flesh
ArenÕt agreeing with my mind
With my pale face around my blue tear eyes,

Because even I can cry inside,
Even if I donÕt show it
I can cry and still be happy
Like a winter dining with the sun
And a homeless man drinking to another day

Another pointless day
Because I canÕt feel anything but I feel everything.


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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-09-12 10:32 PM


A really sophisticated write!!!
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