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jbstillwater
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since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

0 posted 2009-09-10 02:58 PM




Josh and me, April, 2004


.
He says he wants to
"slip away"
bathing in the coolness
of his own shade
Tears creep upon his song
before the aria ends
begging forgiveness
and a sweet prayer for sleep
For in dreams he is reborn
Even as an oak blooms again
after the hail
And, yet
We give him naught
For we have not yet
dreamed his dream
danced his song
nor have we
captured his shadow
lost amongst youth
and a happy smile

He can not "slip away"


author's note: No secret that I adore Josh Groban and his music.  Thought I would shre this one with all of you.

Huggs
Jan

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-10 03:55 PM


I am listening to "You are loved" on Youtube ... had to check him out as I never had the opportunity before.

Dear Janet, this is an incredibly profound and stirring poem. I understand why you are a fan! His voice is really beautiful, warm and intense.

What a lovely picture too!

Thank you for sharing this with us and for making me discover this artist.

Hugs.
Margherita

jbstillwater
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since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
2 posted 2009-09-10 04:37 PM


Oh yes, Margrit, Josh is great!  I have had thae oportunity to meet him several times, once with his entire family.  He truely is a sweet heart.  His people allow me to put his music up on my own web=site now and then and I currently have "The Prayer" up with Celine Dionne.  Check it out.  It is number three on the juke box, right afater one of my own songs

Huggs
Jan

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-09-10 05:24 PM


Lovely poem, Janet!!!!! ~ Always a pleasure to read your fabulous poetry, also for others.


ARCTIC WIND

jbstillwater
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since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
4 posted 2009-09-10 07:03 PM


hanks ARtic, happy that you enjoyed it

Jan

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