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Don't listen to me
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Don't listen to me |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Don't listen Are you crazy? Don't listen Are you insane? Don't listen I got nothin' to say No experience to be learned From this life of sin Don't listen They don't. Why should you? They won't. You should too. Ignore me. Please? Prove to me this life Is as predictable as I perceive. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
A very interesting write. Life is very predictable for the secular person, because each event occuring in their lives is instantly interperated in how it effects them personally. Not by what is good for everyone, but what does it does for me. Each secular person is their own little God. If something goes wrong it must be someone elses fault. I like your poem!!! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you for the response.  |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Why don't we run this poem back up to the top and see if we can get more comments. I think your poem deserves it, don't you! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Looks like its just us |
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