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eve & howard (Outlaws) |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
saloon girl : so you’re a writer [Howard smiles] among other things saloon girl : can i buy you a drink? howard : sure just then …. a girl walks in patron : look, a "stun" gun fighter [Howard looks up] nice carefully she surveys the room until she spots Howard standing in a corner sipping hot cocoa surprised at this handsome guy not shying away [she walks up to Howard] eve : are you Howard Mcclain? howard : that’d be me miss eve : are you interested in sighing? howard : are you in a forgiving mood? eve : i am [staring at the marshmellows in his cocoa] crying ain’t much of living girl [the saloon falls silent] you know, this isn’t necessary you’re already giving this dude more than what’s necessary just walk away [pondering his advice] Eve decides to take it walks towards the saloon doors and then disappears the saloon patrons breath a sigh of relief until ….. [the saloon doors open again] Eve walks through the rooms falls silent with only Eve’s spurs clanging against the wooden floor to serve as rapport it was obvious to everyone sitting in the room that these two had more than feelings to explore [standing in front of Howard] i had to come back howard : i know quicker than lightning Eve reaches for a hankerchief but Howard does her one better and blows her a kiss catching her breath Eve staggers back she notices Howard’s open briefcase love letters? stunned, she wanted to ask about the lovely girl getters but her lovely reflexes took over she reaches for another hankerchief simply lovely Howard mused and then blew her another kiss this time Howard didn’t miss eve : wait, my wedding ring!!!!!! but even as she yells out the fair dame knew she was fair game if she wanted to play fair she’d have to extinguish her flame and that wouldn’t be fair to either of them she knew he had game but this …… ??? with no legitimate excuse to back out of an interaction that was definitely heading towards a fling Eve spots a window [Howard realizing her strategy] calls out miss …… !!!! miss …… !!!! but Eve was already experiencing too much bliss swiftly she traveled across the room and turned around to look at the man who would rival the affections of her groom passion loomed then … Eve crashes through a window even while rolling on the ground Eve thought to herself why did I diss him? why did I diss him? [Howard runs to the window] Eve jumps up and whistles as two horses come running around the corner Eve and her partner smoothly jumps onto their backs and …. heee – yaahaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!! they gallop away [Howard whistles to himself] what a woman still stunned the patrons in the saloon slowly regain their senses [one of the saloon girls walks over to Howard] you think she’ll be back one day? his heart said no but … at that moment he looks over to his briefcase the letters …. gone …. could it be possible? picks up his cup of Swiss Miss [smiling to himself] puts on his hat looks over to the saloon girl saloon girl : well sir, do you think it’s possible? [Howard smiles] i reckon so miss i reckon so love, eve & howard [This message has been edited by howardtsu (09-09-2009 09:09 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now, that was some tale, dear Howard! Enjoyed it! Love, M |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
An interesting tale! I see you and I both like the same old west movie. I've seen it or parts of it 15 times at least. I can only say "Doin' good ain't got no end." or "Endeavor to perceiver" or "pay me next time you see me." There were lots of good lines in that movie. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
We like the same old west movies. "endeavor to perceiver." "doing' good ain't got no end." "Pay me next time you see me." That movie had a lot of good lines." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed every bit of it. I liked how you jumped right into the story, and really brought it to life.  ARCTIC WIND |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
there were thanks gbride |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
thanks artic wind and margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Howard.. you really do wonderful things with words! enjoyed this very much Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
thanks roniece |
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