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FORGIVENESS
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
A mistake however small Ruins relations good and strong The one you hurt never hears your call Try,however you may to right your wrong. Humans are not a perfect race We hear:"To err is human,to forgive divine" But from the mind its not easy to mistake,erase But when asked sincerely , it is cruel to decline. Quoth Shakespear"Mercy is twice blessed" It indeed is,and follow it must we Not very hard if on the asker we doted Big heart must have we,howsoever angry maybe we. Pleasure it is to see a dear face cheery God from above blesses and giver too has to agree Its nice to see a loved one with happiness go crazy Return will the days for being chatty and lazy. Once again the two will be chummy Frogiving the wounds inflicted by the other Enjoy the others company and be dopey Be there to make their buddy stonger. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
There is much wisdom in your write. There is a good medicine in laughter. Would you write us another poem about India and its stories? We learn so little about it here in the USA. Love your poems |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Timely write for me, really. I know forgiveness is a mighty grace to bestow on others and on ourselves too ... Wonderfully sensitive write. Thank you for this. Love, Margherita |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, sometimes a little turbulance can strengthe a relationship Forgiving is sometimes not too difficult Reconsiliation is harder but neccessary Good poem Liz |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Fewer poems shine brighter than the ones pointing out truth and compassion. You have done very well with this one  |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Being judgmental is so very easy than to be forgiving in nature. Very thoughtful, Esha. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A fine write, one to savor. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Humans are not a perfect race We hear:"To err is human,to forgive divine" But from the mind its not easy to mistake,erase But when asked sincerely , it is cruel to decline. Dear Esha, this is a very thoughtful post you wrote it well, Take care. love, Lindsay |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Good rules to live by. Perfection is overrated, and highly unlikely. Loving your thoughts here~ |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
True and lovely message in your poem Esha. Although I loved your whole poem, I especially liked your first verse, because say and do what you may, some things cannot be mended and (some) people have memories like elephants. Heart2Heart  |
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