Open Poetry #45 |
adrift on whispers |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
we took those rowing of boat moments between the drifting side of sleep and that gentle breeze of hems before dawn leans down low to kiss and shared the scent of our new leather as our eyes searched their back skins then opened to find another's eyes waiting to see ours for the first light of day those moments where our hands were confused about the difference between proper and the desire to know heaven from experience when no one was around to hear our prayers wordless words that just stayed on our lips and made our soul moan from heart bottoms then fly high above our recollection wingless like gauze before the threads when only the weaver could dream them true __________ daark (do of sand) |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
A really interesting poem of vivid imagray |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am seeing your romantic undersides and I don't know whether to leer or swoon. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Again, every line is a gem on its own, spilling sparks of emotion. I feel like tip-toeing out of a wondrous scenery, as there is a touch of sacredness in this. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Gbride. Thank you much ___________ Ms ali-san. Do both. I enjoy your eyes both ways. Thanks babe _____________ Ms mar. Thanks lady friend |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Enjoy you soft and sibilant in my ear. Loverly. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP...thanks lady friend...miss your pen here!! |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
I really read your poems more than once to grasp the meaning,but in the end I do them . Feel like a dunce while reading your poems Love Esha |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Esha friend It takes awhile for my weave to become visible but soon you will read between the lines easily. Thank you for spending the time. |
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