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Open Poetry #45

my love

Krystallus
New Member

since 2009-09-06

Posts 3

0 posted 2009-09-06 10:24 PM

Caught in the spires of time
my heart attempting to differentiate
between good and bad
my eye's searching for answer
among all things in between

My hands cry out as they shake
not knowing what love is,
why oh why the torment my father
up above

Where the spires consist
my love does not,
my vision knowing no bound in time
why oh why do I know these things

The cries reach my ears
from the borders of tomorrow
and my soul it screams out for them all
every tear shed ever sorrow come to pass,
I forsee it all in a torrent of dreams

Laughter is a grey to me
as all I hear is silence,
deaf and oblivious to the passing of times,
deaf and oblivious to the hurt

Shut it out? never only hold it at bay!
for a dam is not absolute.
everything lives and passes,
lives and passes.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-09-07 01:12 AM

I enjoyed this very much!

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

2 posted 2009-09-07 01:22 AM

Profound... it seems your faith, your strength is truly beyond the confines of spires... as I think it is, should be

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