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Emi<3Naruto =]
Junior Member

since 2009-09-05

Posts 32

0 posted 2009-09-06 01:22 PM

Freedom is like chocolate,
You can taste the bittersweet.
It's like a summer day,
You love the air but hate the heat.

After rain has passed,
Enjoy the smell but not the slip.
It's like the perfect shoe,
So pretty, but doesn't fit.

It's like a destination,
Sometimes near, sometimes far.
Freedom is like life,
Sometimes easy, sometimes hard.

For a time so long i had wanted to be free,
Some things for me were misunderstod,
And i took them as bondage.
Yeah it took a while to see that freedom is like chocolate.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2009-09-06 01:26 PM

Freedom is sometimes a precious gift in countries. Everyone should have a sense of freedom. Welcome to Pip

ARCTIC WIND

Emi<3Naruto =]
Junior Member

since 2009-09-05

Posts 32

2 posted 2009-09-06 01:36 PM

Thank you for your thoughts. I'm pretty excited to be here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-09-08 07:16 PM

Nice...James

anniepimm54
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 110

4 posted 2009-09-08 07:43 PM

This is an excellent poem
beautiful story you have told here
Thank you for sharing
Annie

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

5 posted 2009-09-09 02:06 AM

Loved this poem.

I'd like to add a thought of my own. :p

'Life's really a chocolate box,
Some do without, others have plenty,
It sticks in my throat, my stomach's in knots,
While your box is so full, mine's perpetually empty'.

Welcome to PiP.

My ex-girlfriend Shannon was obsessed with Naruto. :s

'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'.

ESHA SEN GUPTA
Member

since 2009-09-01

Posts 108
Maharashtra,India

6 posted 2009-09-09 07:28 AM

Freedom is very precious in my country as we achieved it after a long and hard fight but at the same time there are many issues specially the women in my country so I appreciate what you have written.

Love Esha

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-09-09 04:22 PM

Welcome to Pip!

I enjoyed your lovely first entry! It takes a great amount of maturity to well use and administrate freedom in whatever situation.

Love,
Margherita

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

8 posted 2009-09-12 10:11 AM

Good one!

Emi<3Naruto =]
Junior Member

since 2009-09-05

Posts 32

9 posted 2009-09-20 12:03 PM

Haha I LOVE that show!!!! thank you all for your comments

im so glad to be here!

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