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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-09-05 04:30 AM

Fine weather.
mosquitoes in journey,
impervious to sky.

Astringent feelings,
I am afraid of the winter,
my shoulder dislocates

Who speaks
to trees in cages ?
who listens to the rose?

Fine weather.
impervious to sky,
I leave you.

GBride
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1 posted 2009-09-05 05:41 AM

A really nice poem

ESHA SEN GUPTA
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2 posted 2009-09-05 05:59 AM

shortand simple but from the heart-Mrs.Esha

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-09-05 07:04 AM

Dear Yann, this is exquisitely done.

But at least in Winter there will be no mosquitos around! I am one of their favorite victims and I can't say I requite their affection!

For the shoulder, you might want to go on swimming ... even if in a pool?

I feel like lingering here for a while ... saying good bye to Summer. But here there are no signs at all, the heat persists and we all are losing our minds, unable to think straight (just what you said in "fatigue").

Love and joy.
Margherita

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2009-09-05 10:02 AM

Lovely Poem.

ARCTIC WIND

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2009-09-05 07:52 PM

YES ...

"who listens to a rose?!" ...

a 'penning' most pleasant !!

[assuredly, this poet 'listens'
to a fine Scottish rose!]

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2009-09-05 10:37 PM

Winter is knocking at the door and looks like not many of us are a fan of winter. I know about the rose, hardly there are any roses in my garden during winter, even though it doesn't snow here. Nice write...

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

2islander2
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7 posted 2009-09-06 04:00 AM

Thanks Gbride for reading and commenting.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2009-09-06 04:01 AM

thanks esha, glad you appreciated it and made a comment.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-09-06 04:05 AM

hello dear Margherita, yes winter will be deprived of mosquitoes, that's a good point. I did a lot of swimming during solme years after my dislocation, now I am used to it, I simply try to avoid some gestures, I can't do what I want and have to care, I think I didn't discolcate since 7 or 8 years.

about heat, I guess you will regret it very soon, enjoy your summer in the eternal city.

have a sweet day

yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2009-09-06 04:06 AM

Thanks AW for reading and commenting.

yann

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11 posted 2009-09-06 04:08 AM

Thanks Bruce, I didn't know scottish roses, in rugby the scoots are the thistle, the english are the rose...however thanks for the read and the kind message.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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12 posted 2009-09-06 04:11 AM

Thanks Prasad, you kept me informed, I didn't know india had winters, I guess they are sweet , Thanks for the kind comment and I wait for reading you

have a nice day

yann

Dark Star
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13 posted 2009-09-06 11:54 AM

enjoyed this, thank you

Lana

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14 posted 2009-09-06 11:57 AM

"Who speaks
to trees in cages ?
who listens to the rose?"

~ If anybody can, Yann the Man can!

Hi, Yann! I enjoyed the reeling images and the sensations of summer!

Linda

2islander2
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15 posted 2009-09-06 01:59 PM

thanks Lana for reading and leaving a comment.

yann

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16 posted 2009-09-06 02:03 PM

Oh dear linda, your make such comments, yes I listen roses and speak to trees when they are free, I love their majesty and greenness, their important fonction maintaining life and creating it on this planet....I do it with my heart and nobody can hear that ...Thanks for your so kind comment.

have a nice day

yann

LindsayP
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17 posted 2009-09-06 10:04 PM

A very interesting post this one Yann, I

had to read a second time, well done
my friend. Take care.

Lindsay

brneyedgrly
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18 posted 2009-09-06 11:53 PM

Who speaks
to trees in cages ?
who listens to the rose?
_____________________

Linda took my lines and my comment!!

of course you do...

lovely

Alison

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19 posted 2009-09-07 02:47 AM

yann,

This reminds me of dried flowers that I find in my huge old dictionary. I love it.

Alison

Marchmadness
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20 posted 2009-09-07 01:36 PM

Hi yann, The sensations of summer here has been 100 degree heat, and recently, terrible brush fires, so I'm happy fall is finally here and looking forward to winter. Of course, I understand there are winters and then there are WINTERS. I love your "trees in a cage."
Ida

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21 posted 2009-09-07 01:41 PM

thanks lindsay for the kind and supportive comment...
have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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22 posted 2009-09-07 01:43 PM

hello shellie, so you must read my answer to Linda, smiles,sincere thanks for the read and leaving a comment

yann

2islander2
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23 posted 2009-09-07 01:47 PM

hello Alison, good to hear about you, I am glad this one inspired your thoughts, your comment proves the magic and efficiency of poetry.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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24 posted 2009-09-07 01:51 PM

Hi Ida thanks for the comment, I totally understand your point of view, winters and summers can't be compared everywhere on the planet, I heard about fires and worried about you and I checked on the map of L.A where stood the fires...Now the coming automn will bring some solace I hope so...Thanks for the comment and all the informations.

have a nice day

yann

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