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howardtsu
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0 posted 2009-09-04 03:59 PM


howard :

                                are you guys from Tennessee?

some of them :

                                yes

howard :

                                what made you attend the University of Tennessee?

eve :

                                i've always wanted to live in Knoxville

                                                      [Lane Kiffen walks by]

                                hey Howard

howard :

                                hey Lane

                                staying out of trouble?

lane :

                                trying to

                                waving to the group

                                hey guys

                                don't let his good looks fool you

                                he's not half as bad as he seems

eve :

                                i'll say

lane :

                                looks like you have at least one fan Howard

                                take care Howard

howard :

                                you too Lane

                                well i hope you guys like it here so far

                                                   [smiling at Eve]

                                nudging Eve

friend :

                                don't let his good looks fool you girl

                                i bet he's not half as glad as he seems

other friend :

                                                       i doubt it





                                                                                                                                                  love,

                                                                                                                                                  eve & howard




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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-04 04:17 PM


I enjoy reading you. Another cute one.

M.

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

2 posted 2009-09-05 05:28 AM


A fun poem. Each day I search this list to see who does not have many posts and then I post.
I do not pretend to understand your poem. Some poems prabably do not need understanding they just are.
Someone out here needs to read your thoughts: thanks for posting.

ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
3 posted 2009-09-05 06:13 AM


Funny with a completely new and unique style.
Liked it.Mrs.Esha


howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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4 posted 2009-09-07 03:19 PM


thanks guys  
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