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Open Poetry #45

Sun and Moon

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

0 posted 2009-08-30 12:53 PM

There goes the sun,
sliding below the trees.
leaving long shadows
and a dark world.

The moon now shines,
but far too dim
to carry the burden,
to carry the world.

A faint light in the distance
rises to oversee
and protect us.
from ourselves.

Rileigh

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-08-31 06:34 AM

.... "protect us from ourselves"!! You say it!

But the true light is within, I believe!

Well done.

Love
M

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-09-02 04:27 PM

I agree with Margherita. The light is within, Rileigh - and it shines from you with each poem you share.

Alison

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