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Open Poetry #45
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2009-08-28 08:36 PM

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For
That sin
Which I have
Not done
Yet means
I will be
Losing you

Here
Though you may
Not understand

For however close
I will not
Tell you

Hold my hand


.
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2009-08-29 04:09 AM

Hello huan, this is communication and subtle message of what we can say or not, even as it looks in love, there are things to keep secret. However you tell the essential, the human essence of tolerance...Great work.

yann
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-08-29 09:44 AM

Tender.

M
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