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Open Poetry #45

Mir Ist So Wunderbar

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-08-28 04:34 PM

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Morning

Standing
By the window

You look back
And smile I will
Never forget you

Some things
Are worth
Remembering
Beautiful

Even today

Though now
The world outside
Is dark and sad

In the cold
September rain

.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-08-28 04:36 PM

brilliant and portraying artfully sentiments and attitude, thanks for the poem.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-08-28 04:41 PM

"Mir ist so wunderbar" is a poem in itself.

Most beautiful, John!

M

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-08-28 07:35 PM

Thank you for this enjoyable portrait.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-08-30 10:36 PM

The power of this write pulls the reader into poet's world.
Ida

ramisf
Member

since 2007-05-17

Posts 93

5 posted 2009-09-08 02:43 AM

I was wondering if the september sky can create a new horizon for the beauty of the world to break through your locked window

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-09-08 06:12 AM

"Mir ist so wunderbar" ... it haunts me you know and I might want to choose it as my healing mantra ...

M

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