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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-08-28 04:34 PM


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Morning

Standing
By the window

You look back
And smile I will
Never forget you

Some things
Are worth
Remembering
Beautiful

Even today

Though now
The world outside
Is dark and sad

In the cold
September rain


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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2009-08-28 04:36 PM


brilliant and portraying artfully sentiments and attitude, thanks for the poem.

yann

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-08-28 04:41 PM


"Mir ist so wunderbar" is a poem in itself.

Most beautiful, John!

M

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-08-28 07:35 PM


Thank you for this enjoyable portrait.
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-08-30 10:36 PM


The power of this write pulls the reader into poet's world.
                                   Ida

ramisf
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5 posted 2009-09-08 02:43 AM


I was wondering if the september sky can create a new horizon for the beauty of the world to break through your locked window
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2009-09-08 06:12 AM


"Mir ist so wunderbar" ... it haunts me you know and I might want to choose it as my healing mantra ...

M

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