Open Poetry #45 |
Fascination |
peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Fascination It's fascinating to watch the geese fly, calling their numbers to take to the sky. Forming V's as far as one can see, Victory their final destiny. To & Fro, to the front to lead, floating and fluttering like ships on the sea, forward and aft...one then another taking over the lead. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, here it is your "Fascination" and I love it very much! I am always fascinated when I see those incredible formations in the sky. You rendered this magical event beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello PS, this is so fair about goose fly, the show equals the poem, thanks for the brilliant write. yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely write, peaceseaker, about one of the most beautiful sights nature has to offer. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy not only the sight of the Canada geese as they fly overhead in the fall and on their return in spring, I also enjoy the sound of the honking! ps, your poem is so delightful, that it gives me 'goose'bumples! ~ Forgive me, I'm known to write the occassional groaner. Linda |
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