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And I Will. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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Eclectic and interesting you can be my midnight queen. I will dance with you in the moonlight. We can sleep by day and love by night. I’ll bet your pale glow skin can blur my vision with soft edges and a fisheye lens. With my body I can ripple the surface of your deep blue eyes make your lungs gasp for wind instead of air Let me and I will. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think you hit another home run, Paul. I think I like that you show us your sides. Not just one, but various sides. It makes me feel like I actually see you a bit. Plus, titles are another strong point of yours. Enjoyed - Alison |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I am glad to hear that you think so. I wrote this in like 3 minutes before class. I was looking at a girl, as usual.  I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is a very enticing thought and the whole of your poem is very charming, dear Paul. Love, M  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Let me and I will. " ok  enjoyed this |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Morgoparguh, thanks very much. Seasoup, okay. be there in like, 2 days. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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