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Open Poetry #45

A Broken Heart

Writ_Upon_Emotion
Junior Member

since 2009-08-26

Posts 13
Manchester, England

0 posted 2009-08-26 03:08 PM

The love we had was true,
But through time grew thin
As we are seamlessly aging
I see your world has changed
The dreams we had still remain
true in the purest place,
stored within youth
You make me feel that what i did,
Was an easy thing to do.

left alone
writing this song,
wondering what this weekend brought,
to your life,
seeing your face in that picture
Is why i wont chase the past
I'm afraid to fall too fast,
as it once was,
and didn't last.

I hope one day,
when memories fade,
that a new love be born again,
so this chapter,
may be re-worked,
In a genre, not of love
and once more i can look at you
and reminisce our youth
and be known, as the 1st page
that life demand's.

Writ_Upon_Emotion
Junior Member

since 2009-08-26

Posts 13
Manchester, England

1 posted 2009-08-26 03:39 PM

Written after my first breakup, 20 years old and privelaged enough to feel love.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-08-26 03:45 PM

Nice job, through the whole of life moments will come when we reminisce the past experiences.

At distance the pain looses intensity and we can look at our once broken hearts with more serenity.

Love,
Margrit

Writ_Upon_Emotion
Junior Member

since 2009-08-26

Posts 13
Manchester, England

3 posted 2009-08-26 03:50 PM

The words of one older than me brings me warmth in the knowing =]

Thankyou

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2009-08-27 01:03 AM

very emotional!

~enjoyed!

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