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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes along the brim of one of your top hat mornings I would watch you taller in your pretending bare feet to be that spartling of shimmer on some ocean greeting something fleeting almost, as if I turned my head too quickly and the sursuat of invisible stole you skin and limb and then there you would be again, nonchalantly insouciant and you said you enjoyed that word and how it felt too like sleeves too big around that you could move inside of and not be confined by the proper threads of someone else that they had woven perhaps, just to be a prison for another skin ______________ daark (do of sand) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Like a flou photo revealing special charms and softness. Amazing creative work. I do enjoy this series very much too. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks lady friend.. |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
How you watch and know people! Flowing and story bound...a reat poem! Jan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks jan.... |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Well honestly I understood this one partly.Wish the day would when I will be able to understand them completely.Your poems somehow make me stubborn as I keep reading trying to understand the real meaning. Love Esha |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms esha..you will feel them before you understand them...if I write them right that is..thanks ms |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
you do it right. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
those threads of proper are feeling a bit too tight in those unmentionable places right now  could use some unraveling into a spool of dark |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suzzie C...thanks lady friend ______________ ms inki..you are such a tease...thanks babe for the eyes and thoughts |
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