Open Poetry #45 |
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When we fly together |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity ![]() |
![]() * * * When we fly together * * * You move through my veins like the ache of pan flutes when they echo both the beauty and the sorrow of being in this world and of being in it with you. You settle within my mind’s eyes with the poignancy of a mauve sunset waving good bye with rays of gold and with a promise of smiles within many more tomorrows created into being by our souls. You are the laughter of stars which reflect within our eyes of lovers and tease the thin slice of moon that allows them brighter sparks to cause deep sighs within our hearts and nerve storms upon our fingertips. You are the ethereal footprints upon the highest crests of waves of the all knowing endless ocean where the unique song of our story is recorded by the touch of winds and played just for us forever and ever. You are life’s most exciting manifestation and nothing compares to the pleasure of those moments when we spread our wings to fly in untold heights together in impalpable butterfly lightness through pure elemental love space. * * * [This message has been edited by Margherita (08-26-2009 03:02 AM).] |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Another beautiful write from you, Margherita. Absolutel beautiful! |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And you create a sigh within me as I read the beauty of your poetry. quote: Love, Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dolphina ~ The Queen of Cosmic Love, your dazzling poem is electrifying! You are in a class all of your own! ![]() Love your poetry! Love your spirit! ![]() ![]() ![]() Angelo Terrestre |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Sue, for saving this from oblivion and for telling me you liked it. Thank you, sweet Alison, for sighing along with me ... Angelo Terrestre, Linda of Knights, I know you fly in the same heights and that's why I believe you when you say you love my poems. Thank you from my heart. I love yours too! Have a wonderful day all! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...you dress so lovely in your gown of penned love threads...enjoyed it lady!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear D., thank you, you are so lovingly creative also in your replies ![]() |
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scorchedpen New Member
since 2009-08-26
Posts 5Norfolk, England |
Beautiful and inspiring I love your creative insight. |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
A beautiful combination of spiritual and physical love. Much enjoyed, my friend! Jan |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...Great write. Words of a love bigger than the galaxies can hold...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-27-2009 07:31 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - I sense so much inside you, and you write words of it well. Very nice write... BC |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Our lady of poetry is back, and with what an enchanting poem !!!! Truly exquisite poesy dear Margherita, I have missed your happy presence and bright aura here the past few weeks. Love Katriona ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
a pleasure to read of this love space...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like Linda's title, "Te Queen of Cosmic Love" It fits so beautifully. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear scorchedpen, thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. Thank you, dear Janet, for capturing the universality of this love. Paul dear, thank you so much for your most beautiful comment. It made my heart smile, you got that right. Dear Bill, your sensitivity shows through your kind words, thank you so much. Thank you, dear Katriona, for welcoming me back with such heartwarming words and for appreciating my poem. It feels so good to find you in here too! Dear James, I enjoy your visits to my poetic threads. Thank you so much. Dear Ida, you and Linda bring smiles of joy with your warm and heartfelt comments. Thank you and hugs. Love and joy to all. Margherita ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!! Love, Eric |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
beautiful imagery, a devistating poem!!!! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You are life’s most exciting manifestation and nothing compares to the pleasure of those moments when we spread our wings to fly in untold heights together in impalpable butterfly lightness through pure elemental love space. Beautiful words exquistively put dear Margherita, you excelled yourself with this great post. Take care, love you. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Eric, for coming in here for a moment to read and comment. Dear GBride, thank you for bringing this one back with such a lovely comment, I had pleasure myself in reading it again ... and oh, that ache of pan flutes is just flooding me again!! ![]() Dear Lindsay, I am always happy when you read and enjoy my poems. Thank you so much. Love and have a happy day all, Margherita ![]() |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Beautiful colours and tender yet powerful words go with. Such pleasant read... "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
You are the ethereal footprints upon the highest crests of waves of the all knowing endless ocean where the unique song of our story is recorded by the touch of winds and played just for us forever and ever. ___________________ (if I have to pick just one) ![]() I love your writing..every time ![]() |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita, your words fly too, very high, your poem hypnotized me while reading....What a moment. yann |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
What can I possibly say that has not already been said about this incredible poem? It is just magnificently gorgeous, Margrit. I felt electricty in each line. Perfetc Huggs Jan |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
everyone took my words away ...... ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Prasad, Shellie, Yann, Janet, Michael and Vandana, thank you from my heart for your very kind comments. So nice to see you visiting my thread. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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