El Primer Amor en sus Ojos Azules

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Open Poetry #45

El Primer Amor en sus Ojos Azules

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-08-25 03:35 AM

Apollo rides the western seas,
And casts his rays on balconies,
Where friends are sharing joy and wine,
His light, it quickens eyes that shine.

Her eyes of blue, and golden tress,
A secret love she will confess,
That's nurtured long with silent tears,
'til advent of her woman's years.

Her hand glides as she walks away,
To shores that mourn the dying day,
Apollo smiles, he doesn't miss
Her tasting love within my kiss.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2009-08-25 08:10 AM

"her tasting love within my kiss"

I love this line .... romantic poetry used to be my fortay, but it has been so long since I have put anything down on paper, maybe if I keep reading YOU I will find some inspiration

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-08-25 10:59 AM

Suncleaver,

You brought me a smile before 7:00 am. That's almost an impossibility. I am so not a morning person. Thank you the beauty.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-08-25 04:52 PM

Most beautiful and the title in Spanish is ever so charming!

Love,
Margherita

Toccatta
Junior Member

since 2009-07-08

Posts 26

4 posted 2009-08-25 07:32 PM

VEry pretty!

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