Open Poetry #45 |
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Night Out |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa ![]() |
Just like I knew it would It was there waiting for me Beyond the velvet rope Through a darkened passageway A revolution A freedom The music pushed against me like the touch of an eager lover I could feel it on my skin - like a hot, dry wind So I closed my eyes and let it ride Fast then slow - then back again The rhythm carrying my emotions out No I don't want to dance with you... But yes you can watch... My liberation My release It was Friday night and the moon was high So I put on my party dress so I could dance dance dance If I don't say it...who will? [This message has been edited by MorningStar (11-08-2009 01:05 AM).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely the very best thing for a person! Wish I was tagging along. I dance alone sometimes just for exercise and the heck of it. It's a great release. Nicely done MorningStar |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like fun to me. Carry on. Ida |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Dancing is wicked fun. I'd have asked you to dance if was there. I wouldn't have been wearing my party dress though, so chances are you'd have shot me down. ![]() Great write. I know the feeling. Keep writing. Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very nice! You got talent, girl. I am in a dancing mood too! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I'm sorry I haven't welcomed you and introduced myself as of yet. First things first, wonderful write. Also, Welcome to Pip! ![]() ![]() ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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