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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-08-23 10:28 AM

I can see the finish line
scrawled in pink chalk by children
dancing in the near distance.

You're parked on a pedestal
lifted
with too much tire
for one man to handle.

You're waiting on a pedestal
for me to drive you
over rocks and through mudholes.

You're waiting for me
to abuse you.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-08-23 11:12 AM

I love four-wheelin'!

Glad you're gettin your wheels back, Paul

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-08-23 12:50 PM

Oh you sadist you. Who woulda thought! I like how you write of the different parts of your life.

A

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-08-23 12:54 PM

"You're waiting for me
to abuse you."

~ How did you know?!? I told you, Paul, your poetry makes me do that!

Linda

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-08-23 09:30 PM

Brown eyes, I do too. This jeep is a 5 speed, it has a "granny gear" so it will be awesome for crawling rocks.

Alaboo, I'm glad that you like me, and the way that I write. I'd buy you a drink if you were here.

Linda, don't tempt a weak man.

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-08-25 05:50 PM

Well rendered interaction between you and the Jeep!

It will give you excitement, no doubt.

Love,
M

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-08-25 06:19 PM

let's hope.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Toccatta
Junior Member

since 2009-07-08

Posts 26

7 posted 2009-08-25 07:30 PM

A neat write!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2009-08-26 05:52 AM

Thanks Tocatta. I'm honored to have been affiliated with your first post in any way. :O

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

ESHA SEN GUPTA
Member

since 2009-09-01

Posts 108
Maharashtra,India

9 posted 2009-09-25 09:49 PM

Very unusual but nice.

Love Esha

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2009-09-26 01:07 AM

you know i love this, on many levels

you rock Paul!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

11 posted 2009-09-27 09:07 PM

Thanks E.

Sea... I took the jeep out for it's first wheeling session this weekend. I crawled some crazy rocks. Maybe in my next jeep poem I'll post a picture.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2009-09-27 09:28 PM

sweet!

you can always just email me the pics too!! Looking forward to them

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