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Falling Angels |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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falling angels with pathetic sewn on wings, they pretend falling is flight. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very good |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Love this ... ooxx ________________________ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done...so much in so little... j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done...so much in so little... j. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thanks for the reply Slick Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thank you Misty. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you JW. glad you liked it yoin |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
excellent. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Toccatta Junior Member
since 2009-07-08
Posts 26 |
I like the way you wrote this. It says a lot and looks neat! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Yoinn - this writing is very touching, and well written having the reading think about the words... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A fantastic poem. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I know this feeling of falling...*sigh* I love this! Its sad and beautiful! "Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me" |
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