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Open Poetry #45
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JeMs4LiFe
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since 2009-08-20
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0 posted 2009-08-20 07:16 PM

OUTCAST

People shout,
People hit,
To them I do not fit.

I'm a different colour,
A different race,
Why can't anyone accept my face?

Why do they do this?
That’s what I want to know,
Why do people give me blow after blow?

It’s not right,
It’s not fair,
But they definitely do not care.
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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538
1 posted 2009-08-20 07:55 PM

An interesting write. Do you suppose people are rejected for other reasons than race: class, weight, age, appearance, educational level. There are people that don't like me. I find people that accept me and I hang out with them.
Hey, I like your poem. it moves smoothly and the rhyme is good. Please write some more.
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